Planning: Initial Idea.
Song: Run this town – Jay-z ft. Rihanna & Kanye
Genre: Hip-Hop/ R&B
Narrative: I envision chaotic scenes that involve large amounts of fire and explosions. I want to work with the themes of gangs and violence. I imagine showing the youth as disruptive and taking a stand, showing that they are powerful. Personally I would like to focus more on the young females and using these stereotypical male-like themes to show them in a more empowered light. Whilst doing this I will also like to challenge the theory of mulvely.
Narrative Structure: The narrative structure would be performance and concept. I will do this because all there will be slight narrative I still want it to come across slyly abstract and exciting for the target audience.
Characters: In my video I will use attractive young females however they will not fall into the conventions of the ‘male gaze’ theory. I will show them in a very masculine light so that it empowers them.
MES:
- All black clothing
- Black masks
- Low-key lighting (red, blue, white)
- Bats
- Gas/Smoke
Setting: Dark, urban streets and areas.
Application of theory:
- Will challenge Mulvey’s theory.
- I will involve intertextual reference of youth being disruptive and chaotic
Advantages:
- Mise en Scene would be easy to accomplish
Disadvantages:
- Things such as violence and disruptiveness and mayhem may be hard to achieve without harming anyone or getting into trouble.
Questionnaire:
Name:
- Age:
15 – 20 20 – 25 25 – 30 30+
- Gender:
Male Female
- Occupation:
Student employed unemployed retired
- Which is your preferred genre of music?
Rock Pop Jazz R&B Hip – Hop Classical
- Would you like to see women being empowered in an R&B video?
Yes No
- Is all black attire appealing to you?
Yes No
- What themes attract you?
Love and Romance Violence Drugs Alcohol Feminism
- How would you expect a female R&B artist to be represented?
- Would you like to see text in an R&B music video?
Yes No
- What other types of media do you think apply to the R&B genre?
- How often do you watch music videos?
Always Never Sometimes
- Do you think women should be sexualized in R&B music videos?
Always Never Sometimes
- Do you prefer concept, narrative or performance videos?
Concept/Abstract Narrative Performance
- Low – key or High – Key lighting?
Low High
JOSH'S IDEA...
Song: The main song I had in mind was Tory Lanez - Diego which consists of a combination of the R&B and Hip Hop genre. The song portrays the idea of 'being the new Tony Montana' which is an intertextual reference to the movie Scarface.
Narrative: Concept Based/Performance - My idea mainly covers a concept based music video with some performance of the star artist. Therefore the camera would linger mainly around the artist, the majority of the video, making him the main focus. In addition to this, I would then include the use of young attractive females acting promiscuously towards the artist portraying the stereotypical idea of a Hip Hop artist representing someone who all the ladies want.Narrative Structure: The narrative structure would differ from scene to scene. Meaning that their will be a simultaneous edit, combining scenes from three different locations (Party, underground location, bedroom). Therefore the structure of this video would be conventional to the Hip Hip/R&B genre because it would contain the repetitive use of attractive and luxurious locations with beautiful females and expensive iconography (Cars, jewellery, clothes etc.) which represent the stereotypes of artist using the basic idea in music videos over and over again.Representation of Artists/Characters: Due to the song portraying the idea of 'being the new/modern day wealthy icon (Tony Montana), I would include scenes or flashing images from the film 'Scarface' to match the lyrics. As far as matching the visuals; I will make my artist dress in luxurious 'classical' clothing e.g suits, fur, coats, trench coat and top hats mimicking the character of Tony Montana in which, this way a connection with lyrics and visuals will be displayed (Goodwin's Theory).Mise En Scene (MES):Costume: All White, Tony Montana costume.Colour: Their will be a consistent use of the colour white ONLY on the artist to represent the wealth and 'significance'. In addition to this, I would include the editing of making some of the scenes black and white to portray the time period of 'Scarface'Lighting: High key, focusing on my artist to represent the iconic role being portrayed with the additional use of low key lighting which would represent that underground and 'illegal activity' atmosphere.Setting: Their will be edits transitioning from three locations: Central London, mansion, underground area e.g. abandoned warehouse or under a tunnel.Body language & Facial Expressions: The body language and facial expressions i will direct my artist to display would be the conventional 'cocky' and slouching posture, with exaggerated facial expressions that rap artist usually do as well as throwing hand gestures to represent their aggressive and flashy characteristics.Iconography: Generally I will also use the cliched background atmosphere of attractive cars and objects (jewellery, drugs, clothes etc). For the use of drugs i will use a close up of a females lips with them smoking, to portray the idea of smoking weed.Target Audience:
Song: 67 (Dimzy, ASAP, Liquez, Smallz, Monkey and LD) Lock Arff REMIX
Genre: UK Trap
Narrative: A gang (67) do illegal activities and avoiding the police whilst doing so police tape off the road (lock off) as a result.
Narrative structure: Performance/Narrative based.
Characters: Performers (Dimzy, ASAP, Liquez, Smallz, Monkey and LD)Police officers would also be needed.Female back dancers.
MES:* Tracksuits, hoodies, bomber jackets. (Black/dark clothing.)* Ski mask/face wear.* Police uniforms.* Female clothing that plays on the male gaze.* Contraband iconography. (Drugs and guns.)* Low-key/Dim lighting.
Application of theory:Laura Mulvey – The male gaze.Dyer – Star Image.Goodwin – Lyrics connected to visuals.
Advantages:* Slow-paced instrumental and beats means slow paced editing. (Easier and still affective.)* Slow lyrics mean easier lip syncing.* Easy MES costume clothing.
Disadvantages:* Swearing and explicit lyrics must be censored which dulls the effect of the music video. (No clean version to this soundtrack.)* Multiple star performances means it’s harder to do the music video.* It is hard to recreate illegal activity and the usage of real illegal items is banned during the risk assessment. Making it harder to link the visuals to the lyrics as we can display this.
KATIE'S IDEA...
Narrative: Concept Based/Performance - My idea mainly covers a concept based music video with some performance of the star artist. Therefore the camera would linger mainly around the artist, the majority of the video, making him the main focus. In addition to this, I would then include the use of young attractive females acting promiscuously towards the artist portraying the stereotypical idea of a Hip Hop artist representing someone who all the ladies want.Narrative Structure: The narrative structure would differ from scene to scene. Meaning that their will be a simultaneous edit, combining scenes from three different locations (Party, underground location, bedroom). Therefore the structure of this video would be conventional to the Hip Hip/R&B genre because it would contain the repetitive use of attractive and luxurious locations with beautiful females and expensive iconography (Cars, jewellery, clothes etc.) which represent the stereotypes of artist using the basic idea in music videos over and over again.Representation of Artists/Characters: Due to the song portraying the idea of 'being the new/modern day wealthy icon (Tony Montana), I would include scenes or flashing images from the film 'Scarface' to match the lyrics. As far as matching the visuals; I will make my artist dress in luxurious 'classical' clothing e.g suits, fur, coats, trench coat and top hats mimicking the character of Tony Montana in which, this way a connection with lyrics and visuals will be displayed (Goodwin's Theory).Mise En Scene (MES):Costume: All White, Tony Montana costume.Colour: Their will be a consistent use of the colour white ONLY on the artist to represent the wealth and 'significance'. In addition to this, I would include the editing of making some of the scenes black and white to portray the time period of 'Scarface'Lighting: High key, focusing on my artist to represent the iconic role being portrayed with the additional use of low key lighting which would represent that underground and 'illegal activity' atmosphere.Setting: Their will be edits transitioning from three locations: Central London, mansion, underground area e.g. abandoned warehouse or under a tunnel.Body language & Facial Expressions: The body language and facial expressions i will direct my artist to display would be the conventional 'cocky' and slouching posture, with exaggerated facial expressions that rap artist usually do as well as throwing hand gestures to represent their aggressive and flashy characteristics.Iconography: Generally I will also use the cliched background atmosphere of attractive cars and objects (jewellery, drugs, clothes etc). For the use of drugs i will use a close up of a females lips with them smoking, to portray the idea of smoking weed.Target Audience:
- Ages from 16 - 30
- Both male and female
- Stereotypical black race who tend to prefer the genre of R&B/Hip Hop
- Occupation: C2 - E class
Song: 67 (Dimzy, ASAP, Liquez, Smallz, Monkey and LD) Lock Arff REMIX
Genre: UK Trap
Narrative: A gang (67) do illegal activities and avoiding the police whilst doing so police tape off the road (lock off) as a result.
Narrative structure: Performance/Narrative based.
Characters: Performers (Dimzy, ASAP, Liquez, Smallz, Monkey and LD)Police officers would also be needed.Female back dancers.
MES:* Tracksuits, hoodies, bomber jackets. (Black/dark clothing.)* Ski mask/face wear.* Police uniforms.* Female clothing that plays on the male gaze.* Contraband iconography. (Drugs and guns.)* Low-key/Dim lighting.
Application of theory:Laura Mulvey – The male gaze.Dyer – Star Image.Goodwin – Lyrics connected to visuals.
Advantages:* Slow-paced instrumental and beats means slow paced editing. (Easier and still affective.)* Slow lyrics mean easier lip syncing.* Easy MES costume clothing.
Disadvantages:* Swearing and explicit lyrics must be censored which dulls the effect of the music video. (No clean version to this soundtrack.)* Multiple star performances means it’s harder to do the music video.* It is hard to recreate illegal activity and the usage of real illegal items is banned during the risk assessment. Making it harder to link the visuals to the lyrics as we can display this.
KATIE'S IDEA...
Song: "Run This Town" by Rihanna (Trap Remix)
Genre: RnB and Hip Hop
Highly proficient drafting of ideas evident here of all members of the groups proposing an idea. Good to see that you have thought about your idea in a lot more detail by including the questionnaire you created to gather feedback.
ReplyDeleteTo improve;
-be more specific to your application of theory, some ideas just state which ones you will use
-advantages and disadvantages of Josh's idea?
-state at the end which idea you are likely to go with and why?
-how has this group planning and drafting been beneficial?
-consider your layout on this post